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I knew I should have stayed away from backgrounds... ;n;

So... yeah.

Faves and comments (and critiques!) are greatly appriciated! xD

This is Korra somewhere in the Earth Nation... I had to disguise her as this is my art homework.

Please tell me how to improve on backgrounds... Looking at it now doesn't make it look better.

This is completely original work done by me. Korra belongs to her creators... XD
Please do not use without permission! Thank you ;u;
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Critique by ~shortnsweet615 Nov 12, 2012, 4:53:05 PM
Very Nice! The perspective on the birds is fantastic with the closest one being the largest and the one furthest away being smallest. The shading on everything was also executed very well. Even the grass is shaded to perfection almost. I guess one thing is changing the middle bird's direction of flight. With it being so close the first bird, it might come across as the second 'pose' if you will of the first birds flight(Bird #1=wings up; Bird #2=Wings down). Just be mindful of little things like that. I really appreciate the unknown aspect of the girls pose. Its so obscure and thoughtful that you don't know what she's thinking or even possibly thinking of doing. Great job with her in regards to proportion and shading. I might've added a small bit of her hand though because it looks like she doesn't have one. Aside from that. GREAT job :)
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Critique by ~sophiakuso Nov 5, 2012, 7:30:26 PM
over all this is a very well done piece of art. :)
if you think the background doesn't look good try adding some light colors. sometimes the background of my drawings at home look really dull and when i add something like yellow to add sunlight it looks a lot better. :D
you should download gimp. it's a free program and it's like a free version of photoshop but it allows you to makes things fuzzy or sharper looking or lighter or darker. it really helps me when i upload my drawings to my computer.

all in all, this is a very good piece of work and i think it should be put in a fan art museum or something. XD

good job!
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~Kida-10 Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist
very nice!
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=xAmeChanx Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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~dreamsinpaint Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's really goood!!!! :) the only thing is that her body is kind of short
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=xAmeChanx Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, a few people have picked up on that :)
Thank you very much! :iconbrohugplz:
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~ArtySpartyGirl Nov 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow
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=xAmeChanx Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much! :blush:

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~Inthivity Nov 7, 2012
This is really great! You are an anime master!!! ;)

To improve on the background, well...it's good if you're going for an anime style- simple, fuzzy, and somewhat-scratchy. However, if you're looking for a more realistic look, try adding more varied colors and objects. Maybe a bright sun in the sky, some trees on the distant mountain...be creative! I really like the birds though. Good job!
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=xAmeChanx Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I would have done that if I had more time, this was my art homework :D

Ok, thank you for the tips :) :tighthug:
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Mood: Love ~firila12 Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Epic !
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=xAmeChanx Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
I still need to work on it though :)
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